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    Hey guys ... I''m finally getting ready in returning so I wanted to ask your opinions on this novel!


    Do you guys want me to re-write this novel and make changes to it to make it better or continue as it is?


    I understand the beginning and the Dsphne part was slightly iffy so I''m thinking of fixing that.


    If changes are wanted ... mention your changes in the comments below.


    Please no rude comments ... I just want to make a more enjoyable novel for you all to read.@@